2/12/2007

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It will be a good experience for children to learn how to communicate with the animals. The animals are in the cage, however, children can still meet them and feel. Going to zoo and meeting animal will be a never-forget experience to them.

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It will be a very important experience for children to visit the zoos. Most of the animals can be observed from the short distance. Going to the zoos and meeting the animals are definitely one of the never-forget moments to them. I brought my niece and nephew to a zoo near my home and they were so happy that I could see all the animals that they learned from the books. They tried to talk with all the animals and they believed the animals were their real friends. Going to zoos will help children to grow in their emotional aspect as well as knowledge.

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